ohmohm
12-03-2013, 13:52
ส่งให้เพื่อนๆได้คอมเม้นด่ากันครับท่าน นายเอ็มครับผมวาดมาแล้ว 3 หน้า แต่ยังไม่จบ การดำเนินเรื่องอยากให้เป็ดน้อยโดนส่งกลับประเทศในวันเดียว ไม่ได้เข้าไปเหยียบอเมริกา(เหยียบแต่ Air Port) อันเนื่องมาจากเหตุผลใดบางอย่าง วาดๆไปชัดจบไม่เป็นละครับ ผมลองเดินเรื่องแบบไล่ฉากเยอะ และไม่รีบจบเหมือนการ์ตูนที่แล้วๆมา
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ช่วงแรกของความฮาเริ่มต้นขึ้นที่ Duty Free ครับผม
:undecided::undecided:
ขอคำวิจารณ์แบบยาวๆกันหน่อยครับ เพื่อการปรับปรุงเนื้อเรื่องและภาพที่ดีขึ้น
มุขฮาหื่นไปไหม ลองมาดู ลองมาบอกให้ผมรู้ด้วยก๊าบๆๆๆๆ
ดูแบบเต็มๆไม่มีอะไรมาขั้นที่นี้จ้าาา
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ช่วงแรกของความฮาเริ่มต้นขึ้นที่ Duty Free ครับผม
:undecided::undecided:
ขอคำวิจารณ์แบบยาวๆกันหน่อยครับ เพื่อการปรับปรุงเนื้อเรื่องและภาพที่ดีขึ้น
มุขฮาหื่นไปไหม ลองมาดู ลองมาบอกให้ผมรู้ด้วยก๊าบๆๆๆๆ